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Giant pandas live in China. Giant pandas live in bamboo forests. People have been cutting down their trees. Giant pandas have been leaving their homes. People have been capturng them. Pandas have been kept in zoos to preserve the species.
Spencer - About Pandas
Giant pandas are athletic. Giant pandas can do somersaults. Giant pandas can climb trees to take a nap. They can swim better than humans. Pandas are awesome to me.
Gabby - Giant Panadas
Giant pandas live in bamboo forests. Giant pandas give birth to baby pandas. Baby pandas are pink when they are born. Giant pandas eat up to sixteen hours a day to stay healthy. Giant pandas love to play. Giant pandas live in bamboo for that they don't have to walk to get bamboo. I love pandas!
Michelle - Giant Pandass
Baby pandas are born alive. They are mammals. When they are just born, they have no fur yet. They are very small when they are just born. They are only about three ounces. The mothers are very gentle with their babies. I LOVE PANDAS!
Henry - How Pandas are Made
Pandas make great mothers. A panda's baby is 3 ounces and 6 inches when born. They learn everything that their mother knows. Then they look for a mate. The female makes a den for the male. The female makes the den with branches and leaves. She makes a cub. The cub has pink skin and its eyes are closed. Pandas rule even though they're chubby.
Thomas - Giant Pandas
Pandas live in the Chinese forests. Pandas find bamboo in the forest. The female panda gives birth in a secret place. The girl panda is called a sow. Pandas are endangered because Chinese people cut down their forests. There are less than 1,000 pandas left in the wild. I think pandas are great animals.
Jessica - Giant Pandas
Pandas are very athletic. Pandas like playing in the snow. The panda swims in the river. Pandas like to climb up trees. Pandas like to roll in the hills. They also walk in the forest. Pandas are very athletic.
Rachael - Giant Pandas
Pandas are athletic. They can climb up trees and hills. Pandas also like to swim. They can stick their heads up while swimming. Sometimes they roll around. Sometimes they run around. Pandas can do a somersault like I can. I think pandas are cool.
Kathryn - Giant Pandas
Pandas are very flexible. Pandas can play and do somersaults. Pandas can swim better than humans because they have strong muscles. Pandas are playful for their size. Pandas can run because their muscles are so good. Pandas climb to go to bed and get their food. I think pandas are a great animal.
Baz - All About Pandas
Giant pandas are athletic. Pandas like to swim. Sometimes if pandas want to run they run. Cubs can climb trees. Some pandas sleep in trees. Pandas can even do somersaults. Cubs like to play. Pandas are cool.
Nicole - Giant Pandas
Pandas live in the forest. Pandas eat a lot of bamboo. In the 1900's they would eat meat, but their diet has changed over time. There are about 1,000 pandas in China's forests. People were cutting down bamboo, but now the Chinese are not. Pandas are still endangered. Pandas make their home in China's forests. I wish there were more pandas.
Smith - Giant Pandas - Gifts from China
People around the world love pandas. The mother panda is very nice to her cubs. She takes care of them. The mother panda gets good frest food for the cubs. The mother has one or two babies every year. The baby panda is small for its size. So small that you can hold it in your hands. Baby pandas are covered with pink skin. Giant pandas are cool.
Gabriel - Giant Pandas
Giant pandas live in bamboo forests. Giant pandas have babies. When the babies are born they have pink skin. They eat bamboo. They also grow to be very big. Giant pandas have very sharp teeth. I love pandas!
Eleni - Giant Pandas
Giant pandas are athletic. Giant pands climb to catch their food. They swim to have fun. They roll and get dirty. They run and jump. Giant pandas are athletic in many ways.
I started to show Kylan about expanding into more than one paragraph. I thought I was just planting a seed and maybe I would get two paragraphs. Boy was I surprised! This boy can write!
Kylan - Giant Pandas
Giant pandas are endangered animals. People are cutting down bamboo forests. Giant pandas need more space and forests to live in. They need more bamboo to eat. Right now there are less then 1,000 giant pandas living in the wild. Now people are starting to take care of giant pandas. I wish people would stop cutting down bamboo forests.
People cut down bamboo to make stuff. They make beds, mats, and mats for food. Bamboo is also sometimes used to make houses. Native Chinese use bamboo to make their tents.
Giant pandas need more space because people are cutting down bambee. Today there are reservations where pandas can live. If someone kills any panda, it is declared an official crime.
Giant pandas need more bamboo to eat because people are cutting down forests. They also need more so they can give birth, hide, and have fun.
There are less than 1,000 giant pandas living in the forests of China. There are that few because people are destroying their habitat. China is loaning them to other zoos in the world because China wants the giant pandas to stay safe.
People now realize how many giant pandas are living in the wild. Now we are starting to take care of them. Today most of them are in zoos.
People have stopped cutting down giant panda property. Now they have enough bambee. Now they have destroyed enough property. Now they will save the giant pandas.
